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Coming from a family with strict rules can have its disadvantages For my roommate Phil this is especially true While he was in high school his parents controlled him and his actions immensely For example his dad regulates his music selection when he is home He is not allowed to listen to music that contains vulgar language Now that he is in college and away from his parents the freedom is something he is not accustomed to With these freedoms come many responsibilities Such as doing your homework and studying for tests independently I have noticed that Phil has an extremely difficult time completing his work and spending an adequate amount of time studying for his more demanding classes He spends a significant amount of his time on the computer playing games and downloading songs from Napster Although he procrastinates his work he seems to accomplish it by the time it is due His work ethic is continuously improving Less time at the computer and more time studying have helped this cause enormously His attitude not only as a student but also as a person has taken a new shape He is more tolerant of irritating gestures and comments The facetious remarks that normally accompany his reaction to these gestures have slowly vanished and are replaced with a chuckle or smirkPhils facetious attitude and computer obsession caused many people to talk malignantly about him The year was looking down for Phil and his social life until my computer crashed During the time that the computer was getting repaired Phil deserted the dungeon in our dorm room and explored the jungle just beyond our door Everyones impression of him gradually evolved into an acceptance of him Once he felt accepted Phil was more reluctant to spend time outside the room The social life that was rapidly headed down hill was now resurrected The humor he brings to a conversation is enjoyed vastly by anyone in the
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