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In movies we see fathers and daughters walking down the aisle daddy daughter dances and things like that Well when I was about 11 I remember my two cousins talking about their dad They we talking about how their dad wouldnt let them do something I thought about it and I thought I wish I could ask my dad to do something or get me something but I cant By the time I was born the only time I seen my dad was under lock and key We took hour long trips to sit in uncomfortable plastic chairs after getting a pat down Seeing him in an orange and blue jumpsuit with black shoes In the depressing room with walls with one wall half painted in some scenery for the pictures to be taken in front of The day after I learnt I would never have a real relationship my dad I couldnt stop think about what all my father missed my first word the first time I walked crawled everything Not only did this ruin mine and his relationship but mine and brothers and sisters We were never close only time we all really seen each other was when we would go to my grandmothers she was the only real bond us three had The fact I never really had a dad was hard it made me view things differently It made me think of what all my friends took for granted While they all complained about their dads I wished I had a dad to complain about While they all went to daddy daughter dances I went with my grandpa I wasnt bad but it wasnt the same Having a dad to listen to your problems is always what a girl wants But having a conversation over the phone about problems Isnt the same theres not that warm hug at the end its a operator this call has 15 more
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