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Campaign Finance Reform in the United States

In this informative essay, a student looks at the history of congressional efforts to reform campaign financing practices. The student discusses developments from the Tillman Act of 1907 through to the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971.
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Angela's feedback:

"You've got a well-crafted essay, and your transition statements stand out as being especially on point. In terms of formatting, a check should be done to ensure you've included a citation for all directly quoted material, and your block quote needs some revision to ensure it follows a more standard format. Block quotes are typically indented by half an inch from the left margin, and no blank lines should appear before or after the quote. Meanwhile, review is needed to ensure exactly one space appears between all sentences. If you're going to introduce an abbreviation, then you should use it thereafter in place of the full term. If you're not going to use the abbreviation, then you don't need to include it in the essay. When writing dates featuring the month, day, and year, no ordinal number suffix (e.g., "-th") is included with the day of the month: August 11, 1911."

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