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122ENG-105Profile Rough Draft100914PassionIt was a chilly Monday night in November Busch Stadium was filled with 30397 highly energetic fans who were screaming their heads off and stomping their feet in harmony 30000 of those fans were our very own Bosnians rooting for their home team With each move the crowd produced roars from the stadium The stomping got louder and louder it felt like an earthquake rattling under us The fans stood up the whole game never stopping Life size flags were being held faces were painted blue and gold everywhere I looked flares were lit beers flew it was hectic Though the Bosnians were disappointed with the outcome it was to say the least definitely a game to remember This was not my first soccer match I attended but it was the most memorable in the city of St Louis St Louis is home to 70000 Bosnians the largest population in the United States outside the country itself You can imagine how intense the streets were on this particular day People from all over the states of New York Atlanta Chicago California and Des Moines traveled miles and long hours to see their team play for 90 minutes If thats not dedication I dont know what is The moments leading up to the game were just as chaotic but in a good way Walking down the crowded streets of St Louis the strong aroma of coffee and spices hit you Women sipped on coffee from old brass cups children drank imported soft drinks older men stuffed their faces with various meats and sausages with fluffy bread along side a bud lite All were laughing and talking all at once A mix of Bosnian and English jumbled together to make coherent sentences I saw faces light up with excitement People were driving down Gravois Avenue blasting the Bosnian national anthem and various other music that got you pumped for the events to come If I
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