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Dear members of the school board I strongly feel that the school day needs to end one hour shorter for students in North Carolina I feel this way simply because students would be able to get home clean the house and go to sleep at an earlier time Everyone wants to get home sooner Sitting around school all day is extremely boring Everyone is always dying to get home and if school got out an hour earlier students would get home an hour earlier Instead of getting home at four o clock students would get home at three o clock Also they would be able to concentrate better during the day because they would not feel quite as anxious to get home allowing them to do better in school The second reason school should dismiss at two o clock instead of three is that it would make home life less stressful Students could help out around the house longer before their parents got home Instead of getting home two hours before parents they could get home three hours before parents Then they could clean up the house before their parents got home In return their parents would be very happy making everyone feel less stressed The less stressful a home life the better a student does in school The final reason school should be an hour shorter is that students would be able to go to sleep an hour sooner If students go to sleep an hour sooner they will be able to sleep an hour longer The more sleep students get the more relaxed they feel The more relaxed students feel the better able they concentrate The better students can concentrate the better they will be able to do in school As one can very well see this all links back to one thing If school would end an hour earlier students would be able to perform better academically in school School
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