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"As a first or second draft, the paper is well organized and maintains a focus on one specific topic. However, there are a number of grammatical and stylistic issues that make the essay a bit difficult to understand in some parts. As well, you tend to use imperative sentences quite frequently, and that may not be the best choice depending on the purpose of your assignment. I'd suggest reviewing each sentence carefully and noting when it seems to jump from one idea to the next. This can create a jarring reading experience for your audience and can make your points more difficult to follow. Finally, I'd recommend a thorough round of proofreading to correct and sentence-level and punctuation errors that remain in this draft of your essay."
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