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How Friar Lawrence Failed Romeo and Juliet

This analytical essay argues that the various tragedies of Romeo and Juliet can be traced to Friar Lawrence's meddling, however noble his intentions.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've done a good job bringing together the textual evidence in clearly organized paragraphs that contribute directly to the thesis. Each paragraph uses a topic sentence and concluding sentence that helps the reader keep track of where they are in the argumentation and how the evidence builds toward the conclusion. My main comment is that there are a number of errors in the lower-order concerns, including punctuation issues around the parenthetical citations, inconsistent spelling of the friar's name, and other minor issues that can build up to impact ethos. Use a careful proofread to catch these."

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