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Kibin. (2024). Gender, reproduction, and transformation in the epic of gilgamesh. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/gender-reproduction-and-transformation-in-the-epic-of-gilgamesh-09IkPPpI
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Bridget's feedback:
"This is a good start for an insightful examination of how gender intersects with the message and themes of Gilgamesh. I recommend breaking up the long body paragraph into more focused and structured discussion points. This will help your reader understand the nuances of your argumentation by allowing room for signposting and other guiding language.
As you do this, I recommend reviewing moments where plot summary overtakes analysis. This occurs a few times, for example, when a quotation is presented and then the action described is reiterated, pulling the evidence away from the analysis and merely functioning as "proof." Asserting the usage of the evidence can also help with streamlining presentation and creating an overall more focused essay.
Another area to work with will be proofreading, including errors like missing possessive apostrophes and punctuation issues. Though small, these tend to have an outsized impact on clarity and readability."
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Kibin. (2024). Gender, reproduction, and transformation in the epic of gilgamesh. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/gender-reproduction-and-transformation-in-the-epic-of-gilgamesh-09IkPPpI
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("Gender, Reproduction, and Transformation in the Epic of Gilgamesh.")
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