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Water the median of life Growing up in a small town nestled tightly in the arms of the wasatch front I learned early the importance of nature There was a fine line drawn between religion and the outdoors and the quest of my life was to determine an appropriate balance Water signifying the line between the spiritual and physical played an important role in my secular teachings Cutting through the center of town it was the very phenomenon that I had grown to love the river Soul restored and imagination stirred the words of the river echoed the marks of God Although by nature I stood alone untutored and untouched the waters of life left me free to understand the natural side of Gods order With its flowing properties and unbridled passion to move forward the water was my spirit An old weathered palm tree emerged from the seemingly impenetrable sandy beach I leaned back against its rough surface as the waves of the emerald blue ocean slowly crawled to my feet They lapped relentlessly against the shore as if trying to take me back with them The wind blew gently over the top of the distant incoming waves as they mirrored back the competing rays of sun With each reflection I narrowly squinted my eyes and continued to marvel at this picturesque interaction of color and beauty I raised my hand to my brow wiping off the beads of sweat that saturated my face As my fingers moved across my sensitive skin I could tell the sun had left its mark I felt their was no escaping the blanket of rays only the clouds above seemed to be able to control The pain was uncomfortable but disappeared quickly as I scooped up the cool water and splashed it on my face I knew that I could not drink the seemingly infinite volume of water which surrounded me so I
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