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The Importance of Speedy and Reliable Online News Sources

This essay discusses the need for up-to-date and easily digestible news sources. The student notes that college students especially have a need for easy access to news sources due to their busy schedules.
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Bob's feedback:

"There are some interesting ideas here that can be developed into a strong paper. The most pressing issue with the essay as it stands is that it's difficult to immediately pinpoint your topic. Are you advocating for a certain type of media? Or discussing the downfalls of different types? Make sure your thesis statement clearly states what you'll be discussing.

You begin exploring some areas (such as the unreliable nature of online news) that could be interesting, but these ideas aren't developed or supported. You also make some broad claims that can be difficult to accept -- such as the idea that college students don't have time to read news articles.

Work on concision as well as focus. Your intro paragraph should give your reader a strong idea of what you'll be discussing, and each paragraph should have its own topic."

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