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Surrender It happened one windy fall day Now that I look back I regret ever taking my little brother to town that day It was the day before election day for the county sheriff and almost everyone was in downtown Ameriland awaiting speeches from the two most popular candidates Ricky Coward was on first and he was rambling about crime and drug use in our fine city I was listening to sheriff Cowards speech when I noticed my younger brother was no longer by my side Frantically I scoured through the masses to find him but I just couldnt After searching for about five or six minutes a police officer came up to me Are you Jim Alexander he asked Yes I replied Weve found your brother Youd better come with me I thought something terrible had happened so I followed the officer into the Baltic Historic Theater He brought me to a small office room and shut the door Wheres my brother I asked the man replied by giving me a left hook to the eye I fell to the floor By this time two other officers and a man dressed in a suit burst in the room They were whispering amongst themselves Is he the one one officer said Yea thats him The well-dressed man replied The well-dressed man walked up to me slowly and confidently and said the most horrifying words Ive ever heard uttered from mans lips Do you ever want to see your brother again Yes I replied in terror He turned and looked at me with disgust and said Well then youll do exactly what we say when we say it I was left speechless I didnt know what to say or think my mind was racing a million miles an hour The man took a small hand gun out of his pocket loaded it and slid it across the table to me We want
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