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The Influence of Globalization on India and China

This is an analytical essay in which the author discusses how globalization has come to be in India and China. The author specifically describes the importance of the Silk Road in terms of it affect on importing, exporting, blending of religions, and the passing on of ideas.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job providing a substantial amount of quality evidence to support your position in regards to the globalization of India and China. You have also formatted your essay in a consistent, neat manner lending to an ease of readability. You have done a great job making sure that you cite the evidence that you used. Although you have included an introduction, it is not entirely clear what the intended goal of your essay is. Make sure that your introduction includes a clear, guiding thesis statement. Then, go through the body of your paper and make sure that each paragraph clearly relates back to the thesis statement. If the goal of your paper is to discuss and identify examples of globalization, with every new concept you introduce make sure the everyday reader understands the concept's relationship to globalization. The are a number formatting, spacing, punctuation, and grammar issues that need to be resolved. Last, make sure that your references are left-aligned and in alphabetical order. "

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