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I can remember taking a family vacation out of town somewhere back in the 80s Like every other black family I was the little kid in the back seat of the car being ignored by my parents and older relatives In my mind Im thinking Why does my mom ignore me when we have company I dont know I was a kid I didnt understand those things at the time On the other hand we had been driving for hours So the family decided to take a rest stop at the mall I hate it when I get stuck with my mom and aunts at the mall because they think about themselves They never want to go in the stores I want to shop in On top of that when you are mad they want to make show out on you and make you look bad These thoughts are rolling through my mind as Im staring out the window I just want to run away and find a new mom who will love me now back to reality This was a huge mall It was so huge that it had an amusement park in the middle of it Since I was a young hard headed and impatient kid I walked off from the family because I got tired of waiting on my mom grandma and aunts to look in every clothing store I was thinking to myself This look like the mall back home So I took it upon myself to observe a little This was easy This is easy How could I get lost in this mall EASY As I journeyed this big palace there were different paths you could take Some how and some way I forgot how to get back to the way I came I telling my self Clint you are not lost Just keep walking and eventually you will run into your family I didnt see the family for about
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