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Should Egg and Sperm Donors Be Compensated for Their Good Genes?

This essay discusses the ethics of egg and sperm donation. The student discusses whether donors should be compensated for having desirable traits that can be passed on to children.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You cover a lot of ground in the debate about compensation for sperm and egg donation. It's a little difficult to tell what exactly your stance is on the issue, however, and this is largely due to clarity and grammar issues.

While you raise some important points, much of this essay is difficult to understand due to how it is written. Most sentences are awkwardly worded and take time to parse. If this is a language barrier issue, consider working with a native English speaker to more effectively get your ideas across.

While you do mention both sides of many of the ethical questions you raise, often your summary of these arguments is surface-level and somewhat dismissive. Also, as noted above, it's often difficult to tell which side you're advocating for.

With some linguistic guidance and a clearer stance, this will be a strong essay."

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