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Mother wasnt always as she is now She didnt always scowl at me or spit out haughty expressions from her candy-red lips and forked tongue Mother used to be kind and loving She used to smile- and not the sinister smirks that she gives out now but true sincere and good-hearted smiles that made my heart warm I havent seen that Mother in eight years It happened the night that I complete all of ten trips around Silice the Sun my tenth birthday Mother had invited everyone to the castle for the eventthough I didnt know a single one of them I didnt see what the big deal wasbut Mother insisted She gave me a smile and assured me that I would have fun That I would get to meet new people and that they would all give me gifts in honor of my greatness I believed her Why shouldnt I have Mother had always been truthful and she had always done whats best for me but I still didnt want to go Every time I meet new people they bring up FatherI hate it when they do that Adae called me in from the gardensthe guests were to arrive in a few hours She washed me scrubbing the grime and dirt from my skin just as she had done since I was an infant She asked where I had been for rolling in the dirt is no place for royalty to play I hadnt been playing in the dirt I had been exploring the gardens climbing trees and looking in burrows where little animals hide I had chased around squirrels and quailI did not roll in the dirt But I saved my breath Adae wouldnt have understood anyway She poured a bucket of warm water over my head and pulled me out of the tub drying
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