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Some people learn their lesson the easy way I learned mine the hard wayOne morning on a cool summer day I was awoken by the smell of freshly made pancakes The aroma lifted me from my bed and down the stairs Good morning my mom said Good morning mother today is the day I become a winner I replied On that day of July 5 2012 I was ready for the national Lego competition to face off against other schools and their Lego robots At the time I was sixteen and full of ambition and as always my rival Steven walked by with the coldest stare imaginable How I hated Steven he was the reason I got suspended from school last year and now here he is My mom knew the tension between us so she pulled me aside Now you listen to me boy you go around with that attitude two towards that boy and I guarantee you will lose focus fall short of the competition and fail My mom said She was right I couldnt let Steven throw me off As we closed in on the competition we were gathered in a large stadium with my in the far left cornerThe tournament was already underway and I was prepared Everything was going good until Steven came up to me and purposely knocked into me thus costing me a point Hey watch where youre going punk I said Oh Im sorry didnt see you there mamas boy Steven replied as he ran off Man how I hated his guts but I stayed focused My robot was now on the field and was flying through all the rocky terrain I had about four minutes to lift a small rock maneuver over a bridge and safely lower the rock in a glass of water While my team was ahead and leading during the break Steven shoved into me making me drop my robot
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