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Kibin. (2024). The life and work of martin luther. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-and-work-of-martin-luther-Y92qQ8st
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Bridget's feedback:
"Attention to detail makes this a vibrant and interesting overview of Luther's personal life. I'd like to check in regarding the opening sentence, which sets the reader up for a consideration of impact; the essay itself, however, is largely a biographical overview. Make sure to check your balance of description and analysis against your prompt and assignment details. If the focus is appropriately on biographical detail, I still recommend some concluding statements about impact after your current final sentence to emphasize Luther's effect on Western culture far beyond his death (last sentence) and push the approach into a more sophisticated space.
Another main task as you move forward will be to clean up some of the quotations. Punctuation should not appear at the end of the quotation before the parenthetical citation, and don't leave any quotations standing on their own -- integrate them into your text. I notice some quotes that don't quite argue for their inclusion (as opposed to a paraphrase or summary) -- consider some revision in those areas to ensure the reader experiences your text and ideas first and foremost."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). The life and work of martin luther. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-and-work-of-martin-luther-Y92qQ8st
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("The Life and Work of Martin Luther.")
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"The Life and Work of Martin Luther." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-and-work-of-martin-luther-Y92qQ8st
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1. "The Life and Work of Martin Luther." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-and-work-of-martin-luther-Y92qQ8st.
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