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Power Within It seemed like yesterday when my parents put me on a plane and shipped me to Minnesota for my highly protested Outward Bound experience Leading up to the fourteenth summer of my life I guess you could say my actions were a little out of place and misunderstood by my parents I was in my own world of bewilderment which always pointed me down the wrong path The next thing I knew I was setting foot in the heart of Minnesotas forest My journey would be 27 days in the woods with two guides and 6 strangers in the same predicament as myself So off we went in five canoes containing four food packs and 5 ponchos which all weighed around 100 pounds to carry on our backs After the first excruciating week everyone started to come around We all became well acquainted with each other and started to bond kind of like family Soon we were canoeing through 6 lakes a day and portaging over 5 miles with our gear I dont know if it was the basics of nature the confinement from society or maybe just the freshest air anyone could ever breathe But my mind became clear and I took on the role as leader of our rebel force I had always been a follower which got me into most of my trouble but now for the first time I could think for myself It was the last stretch of our journey and the guides were nowhere to be seen We had to navigate the last nine days through the woods back to base by ourselves If a decision was to be made my comrades would ask for my opinion first if we got
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