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A thirty-year-old detective-novelist living in southern California named Tommy Phan is on top if the world He had just purchased a brand new Corvette and is living his fantasy of living the American dream On his way home he calls his mother to inform her of his new toy After feeling guilty about the conversation because he is living his dream and not living with his family and working at the family business On his way home he stops at a diner to get something to eat he meets a young blond After he pays he speeds up in his new car so he can arrive home When he arrives at his home he notices a small rag doll on his doorstep Confused but intrigued he picks up the doll and carried it inside He proceeded up his stairs to his computer work with the doll still in hand and placed it up against a lamp After he sits down he studies the doll more carefully and notices a small folded note with a pin holding its place next to the small hand The note is written in Viennese not knowing the language since he was eight he puts it down and examines the doll and sees two stitched crosses where the eyes should be one for the nose one over the heart and five for the mouth He leaves the room and when he enters the doll isnt where he left it and there is a message on his computer that had not been there before It reads the deadline is dawn Scared by the note he tries to find the doll When he picks it up off the floor and props the doll next to the lamp where it had been before He starts to work on his books about a detective named Chippen Wen a charming brave man who can do anything if he has a gun and his fists
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