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Bridget's feedback:
"Your enthusiasm for the novels comes through, forming a connection with your reader. You can take advantage of this by reducing the body paragraphs' reliance on outside source quotations, which at the moment threaten to overwhelm your own thoughts and assessments of Grisham's work. For those quotations you do use, integrate them directly into your text; move beyond "For example..." with the use of signal phrases that name the source.
In terms of lower-order concerns, make sure to proofread and tidy up some unclear phrasing, and polish up any formatting issues per your style guide (such as the use of brackets and some disruptive, and likely accidental, line breaks).
I recommend moving the current two final sentences, which provide details that don't help wrap up the discussion. Related, I think the sentence about high school English composition could be more productively used as a hook in the introduction or to start off the concluding paragraph."
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Kibin. (2024). How john grisham's legal background inspires his novels. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-john-grishams-legal-background-inspires-his-novels-kLVbZokC
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