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BAM She banged her head and put a crack in the wall As herbody slid rubble followed behind As Cheep Cheep slowly gotup she fixed her hair and was ready to attack But whenshelooked up her friend and the villain were gone Shocked shelooked around the room quickly Seeing the damage she nowworried about her wound and her friend Seeking guidance fromher master she jumped roof to roof to their hideout Blamingherselfof the disappearance of her friend and thinking of thebeginningEver since she was little she was trained to fight Having abipolar disorder at birth she was to give her all in this sportonly to her opponents and not to her loved ones Surprisingly atage three she received her black belt in martial arts She wasso strong she could flip a grown man as easy as she could flipher hair At age four she was taught the works of a mafia byher father on her fifth birthday her parents gave herfourmemories shell cherish forever because later that daysomething terrible had happened They were on their way to theparkTurning into an intersection a parked black van sped when thetwo cars collided Cheep Cheep saw her mother in the passengerseat fly into the windshield breaking it and then she heard anoise like a bullet and there she knew it her parents weregone Accomplishing the escape of her car seat she reached overto her parents tugged her moms shirt until her body swungbackand made a soft hit Shocked the girl cried and saw hermothers face with only one eyeball and the other laid on glasswith the optic nerve hanging Devastated she turned to her dadand there she saw a hole in his brain Quickly looking away sheimmediately exited the car and remembered her grandmother livedclose by Seeing the damage and the black van gone shewonderedBack on task she focused on continuing her journey toher grandmothers house Exhausted she realized her grandmotherwasnt home but remembered she installed a doggy
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