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Similarities and Differences Between Anorexia and Bulimia

This is an analytical essay in which the author describes anorexia and bulimia in detail. The author suggests that it is important to understand these disorders because they have serious side effects and are issues that are still regularly dealt with today.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a good job explaining to the reader what each disorder is in detail. You have formatted your essay in a neat manner that allows the essay to be easier to read. The introduction could be elaborated upon to make it more clear what the goal of your essay is. Why is it important to talk about anorexia and bulimia? Since there is so much detail given about each disorder it is concerning that there are so few citations. Any time that you use details from another source it is important that you cite it so that you can avoid plagiarism issues. There are a number of grammar and sentence structure errors throughout the essay that need to be resolved. There feels like there is a lack of transition between new ideas, leading to an abrupt and disconnected feeling throughout the text. There also is a lot of unnecessary repetition throughout the essay. Last, make sure to give your essay a well-rounded conclusion that summarizes the main points you made in the essay and reiterates the goal of the paper."

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