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People deem money to be the most important thing in this world Peoples actions revolve mostly around two things money and power People believe that they can buy happiness Power and money are the things that everyone works to gain in life Money changes peoples motives The world has put a great deal of importance on wealth Nothing in this world comes free so money is necessary to play the game of life power is just a positive add on but people still strive to have it I sought these things Everything I did in life was to acquire wealth and power I saw everything as a competition My motives in life were skewed I believe that everything happens for a reason I am not big on faith but I believe that my placement in Mr Conwells Geometry class was divine intervention Mr Conwell was like no teacher I had ever had in math All my other math teachers that I had in the past were conceited had minimal patience and they believed that their class was the center of the universe Mr Conwell was the total opposite He understood his students Mr Conwell had a lot of patience for his students He understood the math and understood that we often did not Mr Conwell in a few short words was the perfect math teacher If anyone was to sit in on him teaching it would be easily derived that he loved his job He was quick to discover my motives All I wanted was an A I really did not care about learning the material All I wanted to do was memorize for the test to get and A then forget what I had learned He asked me why I cared so much for an A I quickly replied to get a good GPA so I can get into a good college He asked why all that mattered I said to graduate to get
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