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One day while Joe and Jill Hemp were walking through Chronic swamp they came across a trail of blood in the water They followed the trail until it stopped at a dead body The body was of a man who was wearing a camouflage outfit They immediately ran back to their house which was not far from the murder site and called the police Their house was located right on the edge of the swamp When the police got there they roped off the whole area so they could start their investigation At first it looked as if it was definitely a murder but after a few days of investigation the police concluded that the man was probably a hunter who had either fallen out of a tree or just tripped and broken his neck A broken neck was definitely what killed the man The only problem with this hypothesis was that it left a few unanswered questions If the man was a hunter where did his gun or bow go How often did you find a dead hunter just lying in the middle of a swamp Even with these questions police told the Hemps that it was an accident and they were in no danger The Hemps life went on with no interruptions until about two weeks after the hunter was found Another body had been found in the swamp This time the body was a male whom had a business suit on The police came back and investigated this death After about a week they concluded again that it was a broken neck that had killed the victim There were no signs of a struggle so the investigators said that it was some type of freak accident They also told the Hemps to stay out of the swamp The Hemps never went back into the swamp again but one night they were awakened by
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