1. Home

Health, Credit, Employment: Eviction's Vicious Cycle

This essay on the eviction process examines the impact on tenants, which can range from the financial to that of mental health. The student argues that eviction's negative presence in credit scores creates a vicious cycle that impacts employment, mental health, and future housing options. The student recommends a new approach to how credit scores are used.
PAGES
6
WORDS
1,638
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Bridget's feedback:

"You've written a strong essay, with an overall clear and logical organization, structure, argumentation, and use of sources. Overall, this paper is in a very good place in terms of those higher-order concerns and you can turn your attention to the lower-order elements. First will be to ensure the citations are appearing properly in your final file. Second, and most importantly, proofread the essay to ensure clarity, readability, and ethos: I see a number of errors, which range from missing words to sentence boundary issues. Most seem to be typos, as your writing shows otherwise good control of flow, syntax, and mechanics. Consider reading aloud -- this is a useful strategy for catching issues that may be hard to spot after extensive work with a draft."

Learn more about this feedback