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May 2 2011 was a normal night My dad was home from work eating dinner I was off in my room doing my homework I was in the middle of a math problem when I heard the door open I immediately thought to myself that my mom was home I got up and ran into the kitchen to say hi to her When I got into the kitchen I saw that her eyes were red and puffy I asked her what was wrong and she said Get Patrick in here I have to tell you something I was very nervous because it looked like my mom was crying When I got my brother out of his room we walked back into the kitchen I saw that my dad was crying I have never seen my dad cry before that moment My brother asked my mom what was wrong My mom took a deep breath and said to my brother and me Uncle Johnny died At that moment the world I knew was slow It didnt seem real like a bad dream or a horror movie I could slowly feel my heart break into millions of tiny little pieces I fell back into a chair and cried I cried and cried all night wondering why Why one of the most important people in my life were gone forever I couldnt think about finishing my homework or the foolish fight I was in with my best friend I just sat and waited Waited for him to call Waited for it to all be fake a joke I waited for two hours I just sat in my room crying staring at the wall My mom came into my room She told me the rest of the story My uncle John was in his 40s and he didnt take as good care of his body as he should have He had a blood clot so he went to hospital
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