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"Despite heartily disagreeing with your assessment of Brendan Fraser's finest moment, I really enjoyed reading this intersection of research and the personal. Though several moments would be better backed up with sourcing ("I think these people were killed..." could be put into conversation with current theories), the organization of introducing details before exploring your personal thoughts creates ethos and persuasiveness. Where this falters, however, is in a vague reference to "some type of supernatural force..."; while this is not the dominant thread of the paper, it sets up a challenging task of credibility. Further, it's not very clearly explained.
The writing itself strikes a good balance reflective of the paper's purpose. I do see occasional errors or typos, so use a final proofread to ensure a polished draft."
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