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I stood in line having the time of my life I was in Disney World with my best friends and our parents patiently waiting to board the ride Soarin We had been lingering in line in about the same spot for as long as I could keep track Suddenly my mom rushed away Just as she turned past the corner we were about to get on A voice whispered into her ear something ghastly worse than anything we could have ever imagined When she returned a few minutes later her face appeared like a bulging red balloon all blotchy and swollen Her eyes filled with miniscule water droplets dangling in her eyes threatening to spill over Then it came she pulled me aside and explained my sisters best friend Hayley a close friend of our familys MRI results for her brain tumor returned At that point I barely recall what came next No more explanation was necessary the rest was obvious With that I gradually turned and meandered away heading towards the ride entrance to meet up with everyone else Whats wrong questioned Liv one of my friends I was withNothing Im fine My mom just needed to tell me something I replied All the parents looked at me in sorrow and confusion having known the truth behind that lieUnbelievable I acted as if the moment ago had never occurred my number one regretIt seemed like just yesterday Hayley was over at my sisters thirteenth birthday party Her beautiful smile glimmering as bright as the moon-lit sky crowded with millions of shining stars her golden blonde hair glistening in the light as she waltzed around Her artistic voice surged through the house almost as if you could see the delicate music notes bouncing off walls fluttering in all directions Like every other year she displayed a talent show for my family putting us in awe of her precious acting skills and that amazing voice of
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