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The Position of Women in Anglo-Saxon England

In this research essay, a student discusses the status of women in Anglo-Saxon England. The student argues that while women were often able to exercise a great deal of power and influence in their families, the level of power they had was still largely defined by their male relatives.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a great job of weaving quoted material into your analysis and presenting different pieces of information in a cohesive manner. It is clear that you have done your research on the topic and have a well-developed understanding of it. While you handle citations with care, note numbers 16 and 17 are oddly placed. It would make more sense to list them after the period as "16, 17" instead of "16.17". In terms of writing conventions, the word "century" is hyphenated when part of a compound modifier preceding a noun (e.g., "sixth-century society"); otherwise, the term is not hyphenated (e.g., "in the seventh century"). The semicolon is a punctuation mark that should be used sparingly, so you have a slight tendency to overuse it. In addition, your use of the semicolon should be rechecked in the latter half of your work because there are multiple instances where it's been used incorrectly."

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