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The Effects of a Wide Range of Video Games on Children

This essay discusses the idea that video games have a negative impact on children. The student notes that while violent video games do show some correlation with negative behavior, there is a wide range of games available, many of which promote positive behavior.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is a very interesting read and has some important implications. You seem to indicate throughout your paper that video games have a net positive impact on those who play them, yet you concede that violent video games have been demonstrated to have a quantifiable negative impact. Consider revising your introduction and conclusion to focus on the different types of games rather than lumping all video games into one category. Your body paragraphs support this idea well, and with a slight shift of focus, this will be a strong paper."

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