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Wow How could you do this to me I hollered My voice was filled with rage and anger I thought about all the time I had invested into the relationship that I was now about to bring to a sudden end It was like a complete nightmare I had practically been adopted in the family After a meeting with her parents meeting with her godparents who happened to be our pastor and several weekly intimidating comments we had finally been allowed to date And now I wanted to be nowhere around when her family received the shocking news She was too pretty to make such a foolish decisionI remember the first day we met It was on a Sunday morning during an eleven o clock worship service The choir had finished singing and the Pastor had approached the podium As everyone began to stand and applaud I noticed this girl that I had never seen before She had smooth caramel brown skin and long hair her make-up was flawless and her figure captivated the attention of every male that looked upon her My attention was no longer focused on the service because I was too busy trying to get a final glimpse of what appeared to be the perfect woman to marry After church I decide to approach her Either my pick-up lines were brilliant or we just had wonderful dialogue Must have been the dialogue because she gave me her phone number and we continued to talk frequentlyAfter two years of a perfect relationship family outings and abstinence I was ready to pop the big question My dream was about to manifest into reality Our chemistry and interaction with one another could not have been any better I never wanted to leave her side I was in love I had everything planned out I had only told one person and that was her best friend because I wanted her there to
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