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Whitney's feedback:
"I think you made good points both for and against targeting emerging markets. I would recommend considering shorter paragraphs (and perhaps adding headings) to structure your paper a little bit differently. I liked that you first touched on the benefits of targeting emerging markets, then the drawbacks, and then a conclusion, but the paragraphs are so lengthy and detailed that it can be somewhat difficult to keep track of the point you're making in each section. I would also like to see a stronger introduction - it looks like the first paragraph here is the prompt and the second is your introduction, but try to include a stronger thesis in your introduction. It can be as simple as stating that there are pros and cons of targeting emerging markets - as long as you have something that lays out what the rest of your paper is talking about!"
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