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How Charlotte Bronte Uses Setting and Location to Trace Jane Eyre's Sentimental Education

This essay analyzes how Jane Eyre's maturation can be traced across Charlotte Bronte's novel via the locations in which the narrative is set: Gateshead, Lowood, Thornfield, Moor House, and Ferndean. The student describes Jane's final growth as achieving a balance of independence and love for Rochester.
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This essay received an A by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"Your essay has an excellent sense of structure and logic, with a defined thesis that the body paragraphs logically attend to with clear argumentation, helpful signposting, and solid use of evidence. The writing is lucid and appropriate for the situation; I spot a handful of minor errors that should be attended to with a detail-oriented proofread (e.g., your first sentence will correctly read as, "The overriding theme of Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre is..."; note the addition of the author's name). You will also want to tidy up the punctuation that comes after the parenthetical citation (done correctly in the first half, then misplaced in the second half). Finally, there remain opportunities to finetune the writing for efficiency and clarity. For example, the third sentence of the introduction reads "...becomes evident, as well as traceable." This appears to split hairs, so I wonder if a different word choice or some targeted revision could help the reader understand the nuance--for example, consider "becomes evident as a traceable narrative" (this assumes "traceable" is highlighting how the narrative builds up over the course of the novel, across the locations; other similar words in place of "narrative" would include progression, timeline, development...)."

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