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Kibin. (2024). Napster should not be shut down. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/napster-should-not-be-shut-down-8qMVFwxF
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"This is a good review of a complex case. Your introduction does not fully explain the situation. You say Napster should not be shut down, but at this point, you have not yet explained that it is in such danger, or why. You explain the case in the body of the essay, but you can say it more concisely. Read through your essay and consider how you might economize on words. Your conclusion largely repeats the introduction. Try to take a different slant based on what you have told the reader since the introduction. The conclusion should be set apart in a separate paragraph. You have a number of grammatical issues. Run a grammar check and proofread your work to find and correct these errors."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Napster should not be shut down. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/napster-should-not-be-shut-down-8qMVFwxF
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("Napster Should Not Be Shut Down.")
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"Napster Should Not Be Shut Down." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/napster-should-not-be-shut-down-8qMVFwxF
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1. "Napster Should Not Be Shut Down." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/napster-should-not-be-shut-down-8qMVFwxF.
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"Napster Should Not Be Shut Down." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/napster-should-not-be-shut-down-8qMVFwxF.
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