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Topic Should women be allowed to play on male sports teams Method of Development What physical and mental differences do males and females have which might affect the game or moral Tentative Thesis As far as mental and physical attributes are concerned men and women are not created equally Neither is superior however the differences between a man and a woman could affect how they participate in competitive sports I Introductory Paragraph Use examples of differencesstereotypes Womens soccer taking off shirt after winning game vs mens game Women want to compete wmen to earn more respect and to be treated equally Insert thesis Finish with a few points of support from below for transition II Support Paragraphs Mental and Physical differences A Men have more endurance 1 It is scientifically proven that women often tire before men in aerobic exercise 2 So are the lengths of the quarters periods matches etc shortened to womens games B Men are stronger and faster 1 Teams would be competitively uneven when Men outnumber women 2 Women might complain of discrimination when chosen for the lesser positions C What will be done to avoid injury to womens chests 1 List sports where special care will have to be taken if women join in 2 Fouls to womens chests can be considered sexual harassment 3 Men will have to avoid women or relearn the sport they have come to know Transition Paragraph D Men are taught to hit hard and break down the offense 1 Women are taught to be nice and polite 2 Men have years of experience over women in the hit em till they fall department 3 Transition sentence re physical- mental aspects E Years of good manners have taught men that ladies are first and to never harm a lady 1 All of the time spent teaching boys to be
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