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Kibin. (2024). The japanese religion of shintoism. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-japanese-religion-of-shintoism-kRSxtDsw
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"Your first sentence is confusing. Unless you are doing this for reasons of style, you should not write the first word in all capitals, and there is no reason to capitalize the other words. You should write “BC” and “AD” without periods or spaces. Book titles should be italicized. You write “Today (1982).” What does that mean? Today is not 1982. You sometimes include no space between sentences. Pay attention to commas, such as after “Little by little.” You place a hyphen instead of a space early on page 2. When identifying the three categories at the bottom of page 2, you use two incomplete sentences. If you want to list them in this manner, you should place a colon, and then list all three in the same format.
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In-text citation:
(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). The japanese religion of shintoism. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-japanese-religion-of-shintoism-kRSxtDsw
In-text citation:
("The Japanese Religion of Shintoism.")
Works Cited entry:
"The Japanese Religion of Shintoism." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-japanese-religion-of-shintoism-kRSxtDsw
Footnote:
1. "The Japanese Religion of Shintoism." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-japanese-religion-of-shintoism-kRSxtDsw.
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"The Japanese Religion of Shintoism." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-japanese-religion-of-shintoism-kRSxtDsw.
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