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The Reluctant RiderThe atmosphere is filled with blaring pop music and roaring waterLooking behind flocks of people are crowding behind me acting as iftheyre vultures hovering over the dead Were all waiting for a chanceto ride on Wet n Wilds most fearsome rides the Black HoleAs the line creeps closer to the rides entrance fear devours meHesitantly I stay in line swallowing down the nauseating taste ofacidic bile The minutes are cheetahs chasing after prey and before Iknow it Im placing the clear plastic tube into the shockingly icywater I grasp the tube as if Im trapped in the ocean and its the onlything holding me afloat Once I position myself the attendant wishes meluck and Im offI am water slipping and sliding throughout the slide The twinklingglossy blue lights embedded in the slide are lighthouses along the foggysea allowing some vision The water spreads the malodorous odor ofchlorine throughout the whole tube The light tarnishes and a screechpitched high enough to shatter glass slips through my lips like sweethoney Im discombobulated sliding blinded in darkness when finally Isee brilliantly blinding light The water forcefully thrusts me out Im rushing off the ride and nowwith family their oily hands pressing against my moist skin whiskingme away Grinning I feel silly for even having an inkling of fear andI saunter away happily
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