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The Risk of Cerebral Palsy in Infants Due to the Effects of Multiple Births

This is a discussion of medical issues surrounding cerebral palsy for single and multiple births.
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Jim's feedback:

"This is informative and well-written. An incorrect sentence (“Studies show …”) can be corrected by deleting the comma and “which.” A comma should be changed to a semicolon before “therefore.” We say, “these are grounds for concern,” and not “this is grounds for concern.” There should be no comma in “As the number of infants, a mother carries.” The first sentence of page 3 is confusing, and should be clarified. Years 1956–1985 should be separated by an en dash. It is preferable to write “cause for concern” and not “ground.” “Documentation” has a collective plural form, so we do not write “several documentations.” Instead, we might say “much documentation.”"

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