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In my community it is important to follow certain basic rules I call my seven basic rules my commandments We use commandments to keep order in our community If there were no rules our world would have no direction People would do what they want when they want without thinking of the consequences I have listed my commandments for my community in the paragraphs below The first of my commandments is No Smoking Allowed I think this is the most important to me of all my seven commandments I made this one of my commandments because I think smoking is an unhealthy waste of time and money People get cancer because of this habit and the people around them could get sick too In the long run the rule of no smoking will keep members of my community healthier cleaner and happier Smoking also causes pollution to the environment and is very unappealing to the people around you By making this rule my community will be more energetic and active Many people would appreciate this ruleMy second commandment is No Animal Cruelty In my opinion animals were put on this earth to be companions not to kill and to abuse I also understand that animals like cows chickens and pigs are important for food My solution to that would be that when the animals died from old age we would use them for meat The only time it would be acceptable to kill an animal is if it is in pain or has a terminal illness That way we could still have meat but we would have to ration it instead of taking it for granted Animal abuse would not be tolerated in my community at all Our animals need to live a good life and not know what it like to be tortured or abused We dont want our animals to rebel on us like the animals in Animal FarmMy third and fourth commandments
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