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It was last year June 2010 when I was back home in my country Memy sister and my dad used to live together as a family One day after eating dinner we all went to bed as usual The weather condition was so bad we could hear the thudetstorm and the lighting from out side Because of this I could nt sleep for an hour and two At the midnight I heard someone running and shouthing up and down the starirs I taught it was nothing so I just ignored it and went back to bed After a while my sister came running to my room to wake me up She was breathing so fastly I couldnt hear what she was trying to say When I heard that my dad was that my dad was sick me and my sister rummed into my dads rrom to see how he was doing We could see he was so sick and was in a situation where he was starting to close his eyes We were so scared so we tried to call help but no body was able to come It was in the middle of the night so we ddi not know what to do we just staired at each other and we were both lost Then my sister went out and called our neighbor Our neighbor saw what was going on so he brought a car and took my dad to the hospital After the Doctor saw him he told us that my dad was at risk so he suggested a surgery We were so scared so
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