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The fashion industry makes up a large part of our economy Ten billion dollars a year is spent on cosmetics and skin-care products alone Some may think that these fashions and products help raise the self-esteem of women and make them more successful However success is not based on appearance We are judged by our hard work and achievements Womens fashion and cosmetics serve to imprison women rather than liberate them Make-up is money and time consuming billboard images send out false portraits and high-fashion footwear is costly health wise and economically A considerable amount of time is spent on make-up and styling hair It takes at least fifteen minutes to put on the make-up in the morning and it takes ten minutes to take it off at night and if the make-up isnt removed it will clog pores and cause acne This time could be used more productively by perhaps eating a healthier breakfast exercising or getting to school earlier to prepare for classes Liane Faulder of the Edmonton Journal says Part of the problem with worrying about how you look is that it drains you of time money and energy which you could use for other things Like pursing a career reproductive rights or equal pay for work of equal value Or maybe just having fun It is also money consuming Make- up and hair products are expensive The money used to buy cosmetics and hair styling products could be spent for more important things If one has that much money to give away why not save it for a college education or donate it to a charitable organization The time and money spent on cosmetics and hair commodities imprisons women by preventing them from doing more constructive things Next billboard images of waif models cause thousands of women to diet to the point of anorexia People see beautiful models on TV magazines and newspapers These gorgeous models have big breasts
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