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When I was a kid I used to spend long days at the beach by my house I liked the ocean it was a good way to cool off when the days were too hot and a good place to see the sun without buildings or trees being in the way like they always were in my congested neighborhood When I was about seven though my parents moved out of our house on Commonwealth Ave in Boston and to the suburbs where my father felt we can lead a somewhat quieter life outside the bustle of the big city We ended up in an old mill town that had been riding the high tech wave of the early eighties Lowell Massachusetts My mother had taken a job in one of the computer companies and we had a nice house about the same size as our previous one except this one had something that in my seven years in the city had never occurred to me that normal people had a yard Growing up next to the public gardens I had always basked in the sun and wandered the perfectly manicured gardens and trimmed grass with the yearly visitors of swans and Canadian geese I thought it as my place my play ground the people there were guests or friends of my parents and it was polite to share I recall thinking But those days my father on moving day told me were gone We had come to a new place to start over and this is our grass and trees to walk on and play Disappointingly I looked around at the yard and the street next to it behind two fallen fences which were surly older than I was as I sighed The grass was thorny and hurt to walk on and the only two trees leaned diagonally over our yard as if to take our sunlight It was a step down from the
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