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The hot wind was stinging agaist my face I was trying to find some sort of shelter The storm was getting worse I saw a big funnel coming into the small city could feel the wind ripping at my flesh and clothing It nocked me into a building and I rememberd nothing until it was over When I finally oke up I was trapped I couldnt move my body and I could barely breathe It seemed as though I was under some sort of spell I couldnt open my eyes move my hands nothing I heard people around me talking They were looking for the one that were still alive But why were they passing me up I was not dead The sun began to go down I could smell the dead around me Caretakers were walking around now picking up the dead They picked me up roughly Whey didnt they realize I wasnt dead I was put in some sort of truck with other dead onesI could feel the coldness of their bodies and I could smell the hideous odor of deathI knew I was being taken to th funeral home It was hard for me to breahe with the bodies bouncing around on me and the odor of death gagged me When we got to the funer home I was taken to a room and laid out on a table While lying on the table I tried with every ounce of strength to move or talk ut I couldnt Not being able to do any of this I could feel the sting of deathI could hear people talking around meThey would say Noshes not one of ursIt semed like eternity lying there letting people look at me I couldnt show any sort of reaction to show them I was alive After people looked at meI was taken to the embalming room I was laid
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