The Story of Mrs. Nakamura, Who Survived the Hiroshima Bombing

This essay profiles a survivor of the bombing of Hiroshima. The student tells the story of Mrs. Nakamura who, along with her children, survived the bombing and recovered from radiation sickness.

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"You chose to profile a particularly strong person and your admiration for her shows. Much of the imagery you've included about the incident is vivid and brings her character to life. However, this essay is in need of some organization. First, make sure to break the paper down into paragraphs with different topics. Make sure your introduction focuses on Mrs. Nakamura and the main point you want to make about her. It would be a good idea to cut out some of the details that don't directly contribute to the narrative. While you describe the events surrounding Mrs. Nakamura and the dropping of the bomb, there is little analysis of what these events say about the subject's character. Think about the main idea you want your reader to take away from the essay and make sure the text supports that. Finally, consider having the essay proofread thoroughly for spelling/grammar mistakes, sentence fragments, and awkward sentence structures."

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Kibin. (2024). The story of mrs. nakamura, who survived the hiroshima bombing. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-mrs-nakamura-who-survived-the-hiroshima-bombing-Hwl6EWSO

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("The Story of Mrs. Nakamura, Who Survived the Hiroshima Bombing.")

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"The Story of Mrs. Nakamura, Who Survived the Hiroshima Bombing." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-mrs-nakamura-who-survived-the-hiroshima-bombing-Hwl6EWSO

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"The Story of Mrs. Nakamura, Who Survived the Hiroshima Bombing." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-story-of-mrs-nakamura-who-survived-the-hiroshima-bombing-Hwl6EWSO.