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Each and every day I realize how much society is shaped around conformity Everyone desires to do what someone else does wear what their friends wear or talk how others talk Many people in school seem to try and imitate their peers because they want so badly to fit in with the popular crowd And then on the other hand some people like to be different My older brother Tim is someone who enjoys doing what he wants and not what is expected from the popular consensus Though Tim does not strive to fit into the mainstream of society his hard work and determination in life has made him a very successful man He is an example of someone who was able to break away from what others did and still prosperFrom as far back as I can remember and what my family has told me Tim has always been very unique From carrying a brief case dressed in a suit to attend his first class of kindergarten we realized he was one of a kind Inside his brief case was a calendar of his schedule for each and every day showing that he was going to grow up to be very systematic and organized Even when Tim was young he spoke very mature to everyone of authority He had very fine manners and was a hard determined worker When Tim was a little boy he was fortunate enough to spend a lot of time with our Pop-Pop Pop-Pop taught him to work hard for anything he sought Tim could drive a tractor by the age of six As he got a little older he started mowing lawns around the neighborhood for money Tim became very ambitious he loved earning and saving money This was just the start of his successfulnessWalking down the halls of Cumberland Valley High School
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