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Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it If this sounds like you then please share your story I could hear the crackling sound of fat dripping into an open flame and the pungent smell of overdone meat Before I realized my mistake I heard the owner Maxs distinguished voice in his carping tone as he cried Not again Thomas Much to my chagrin I had left a skewer of top sirloin cooking for too long and as soon as my boss had seen that his beloved meat was burned to a crisp he took over the cooking station Over the next few days Maxs words would ring in my head and every time I worked I would be overwhelmed with anxiety All the while I went to work and everyday went home mentally exhausted It was a hot day in July and all the suns heat seemed to be concentrated directly into the restaurant As I trudged along the restaurant and heard countless customers blurting out Cad a carne moleque I would ask myself whether or not I could get them the meat in time and whether or not I was qualified to work at this restaurant After all I had burned two skewers of meat and had walked in on Max telling the manager that I needed to go I could not imagine what he would say if I messed up again I had a strong premonition that soon Max would find a reason to fire me As I walked I could see a pool of water from a distance but I was so disoriented from working all day that I continued walking and before I knew it I was on the ground and my knife was lodged into
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