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Women in Literature: Independence in Jasmine by Bharati Mukherjee

This essay details information about Jyoti/Jasmine, a girl who was able to gain her independence through continuing education and marrying someone who did not enforce that she had to be subservient to him.
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Christina's feedback:

"Your introduction indicates that you will focus on the theme of independence within Jasmine. Please be sure you are offering the reader a focus statement in your introduction, letting them know what you specifically want them to learn by the end of your essay. Some of your body paragraphs, your introduction, and conclusion are on the short side and don’t contain enough information to fully support your claims. Please consider fleshing those out more to include additional support and information. Furthermore, make sure you are giving the in-text citations and listing your sources after the essay. This will ensure the reader knows where your information was received. Be sure to resolve any issues of grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure before submitting your work."

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