scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 705
Walking back down the long dusty path into an experience of a life time knowing I cant go back Ive left my world behind me troubles truths love hates The only things that accompany me on my way are the memories of all the good and bad things that have happened to me The only thing that awaits me on the other side is complete paradise As the cotton candy clouds of heaven open up for me only happiness is left by my side My strawberry body is filled with emotions and yet still feels empty I keep on walking yet something is holding me back a fear an uncertainty What if I dont belong here I could be expelled from this place like a rock being thrown into the lazy ocean lapping at the golden shore I remember all the people I have known all the places I have been I know this is part of the great odyssey that is life and death And yet I still know nothing about the things that will greet me on the other side of the gate and if I want to go on at all The road is getting smaller now and I know I cant stop Everything I am feeling must be pushed forward I mustnt let it hold me back The road is getting steeper as I climb towards a mystery and now I see her She is the thing that keeps me going the warming candle burning in my sensitive aching heart For many years I have waited for this moment hoping it would come but somehow dreading it Her smile is as warm as the sun breaking the horizon at dawn Her lips are the colour of a bright red wet lollypop glistening and twinkling in the sun Her eyes are the pure blue of the sky out of a bedroom window in the morning warm and inviting Her fine
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA