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Have you ever experienced an event where you almost died I haveexperienced three of them but the most haunting one occurred when I wasjust seven I almost drowned which was frightening It happened duringspring breakMy mom woke me up at 900 am I got up from bed and I went to thebathroom I washed my face in the sink and then took a shower After Igot out I went to my window It was a beautiful day outside The sunwas shining bright and the sky was vibrant blue I went to my mom toask her if we were going to do anything today She said that my brothersand I were going to go swimming I was hugged her so hard she couldbarely breatheWhen it was 1200 pm my mom told me to go wear my swimming shortsand goggles I went inside and got dressed My mom then told us to go usto go to the car My mom locked the house and then got in the car Aftertwo minutes of driving we arrived at the swimming pool As soon as sheparked I got out of the car and dove into the pool I was swimming inthree feet because I was scared of going any further After I played inthe pool for an hour I got bored It didnt like being the only one inthree feet so I started swimming towards four feet I started swimmingfaster and faster but when I got there I began to sink I startedscreaming to my mom and brother I was trying to cause commotion bysplashing Finally my mom saw me She told my brother to get me and assoon as she said that he jumped into the pool and saved me Everyonethanked my brother for saving my life and I was happy he saved me tooHave you ever endured an event where you were almost killed I haveexperienced a lot of them but that was the scariest one I
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