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I would never understand love Well the correct way to love so I thought In 2001 it was a nice sunny day While sitting in the living room on the couch with my brothers Silas Anthony Travis and Joseph Valarie my mother was a ticking time bomb My brothers and I were young so we didnt have a full understanding of what was going on Honestly we didnt care Then my mother started to yell on the phone saying Whats the hold up why the hell are they taking so long The police took way too long to bring my brother home from placement Therefore my mother stated to get very frustrated with them Finally my brother Paul made it home This is when my mother told us what had happened My mother stated your dad died There was nothing but silence in the room The cries came like a train reaction Becoming louder and louder I sat there not a tear dropped from my face A piece of me was missing My father All I could think about it the last time we spent together He spent fifty dollar on a fifty cent machine trying to win me a Teddy bear The last thing he said was I love you Thats the last time that I thought I would feel real love from a man My dad always told me never let a man treat me badly never to give my all to someone who doesnt love me the way he should love me I told him okay but I didnt understand what that really meant I never understood love coming from men So now I tend to seek love in all the wrong places because my father died when I was nine years old My dad died in 2001 12 years later I still dont understand the feeling of being lovedDuring high-school I had two boyfriends that both told
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